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[ # ] Invisible Lives Haiku
November 21st, 2007 under Adult Invisibility, Miscellaneous

Hiding in shadows,
Slinking in my dark domain,
Yearning to be seen.

Have you ever written a haiku? It’s a poem with three lines. Line one has 5 syllables, line two has 7, and line three has 5.

It’s a simple formula that can yield powerful results. Mine is above. Will you share your perspective on Invisible Lives with a haiku? For more help with writing your haiku, check out eHow.


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[ # 16 ] Comment from Sara [November 21, 2007, 5:39 pm]

Remembering Truth,
Sharing what it is to be,
Your gift is this light.

XOXO

- Beautiful haiku. Thank you for sharing! Paul

[ # 18 ] Comment from Anonymous [November 27, 2007, 12:57 am]

Here is my experience of living with someone invisible who is striving to be seen.

Chaos. Confusion.
Living with the invisible,
clear is never clear.

Free and transparent.
New visibility brings
joy and connection.

[ # 19 ] Comment from Jennifer Lee [November 29, 2007, 8:15 am]

I love the simple structure of the haiku. Here’s my quick one…

Quiet leadership
Gracefully impacts others
Shine the light on me

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Invisible Lives is a blog by, for, and about people who hide themselves in the shadows of their own lives. Do you lead an invisible life? Do you ever wish you were more visible, more fully engaged with the world, your life, and your true potential? This blog is for you. Welcome.
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